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Greet the Morning
Contributed by
TheNextRobertFrost
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Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 07:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I went out one early, sunny Saturday morning to go out and greet the day. I ran around and around wildly with dew covered feet and soon stood still to greet the warm breeze that was passing through. It greeted me back, kissing me softly on the cheek as it passed me by.
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Re: Greet the Morning
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 07:30:53 PM AEST
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| A pleasant read |
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Re: Greet the Morning
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 08:08:42 PM AEST
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very pretty, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Greet the Morning
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by Colleen on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 08:42:12 PM AEST
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| That was so sweet! It was a very cute idea! I love your poem. |
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Re: Greet the Morning
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by AcrosticCacophany on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:23:53 AM AEST
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The world has given you fingers to write with. I'm sorry to say nature hasn't quite endowed you as comepletely upstairs. After all, evolution isn't usually very revolutionary.
I've read all of your work. Every single one of them. I'm not sure who's telling you this, but the only thing you're going to ever have in common with Robert Frost is a coffin. And that's not going to be for another painfully long time.
This one in particular, in addition to being your first work, is also not very much of a poem. One big paragraph filled with grammatical inconsistencies and an overdose of adjectives does not qualify. For that matter, it's not even a paragraph. Two short lines...
No, not even close.
A butcher knife makes for no scalpel, but a scalpel makes for no butcher knife either.
~The Wordslayer |
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Re: Greet the Morning
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by AcrosticCacophany on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:24:13 AM AEST
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The world has given you fingers to write with. I'm sorry to say nature hasn't quite endowed you as comepletely upstairs. After all, evolution isn't usually very revolutionary.
I've read all of your work. Every single one of them. I'm not sure who's telling you this, but the only thing you're going to ever have in common with Robert Frost is a coffin. And that's not going to be for another painfully long time.
This one in particular, in addition to being your first work, is also not very much of a poem. One big paragraph filled with grammatical inconsistencies and an overdose of adjectives does not qualify. For that matter, it's not even a paragraph. Two short lines...
No, not even close.
A butcher knife makes for no scalpel, but a scalpel makes for no butcher knife either.
~The Wordslayer |
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