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With Longing
Contributed by
ThePumpkinKing
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Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 07:13:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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See what you have and what I don't
Something special
I try to hide this jelousy...
But just one time
I want something better,
and greater than joy
Something that's radiant
But who am I...
to say that I'm needy...?
And now it seems my life is full,
of emptiness
Wanna find someone so smooth
Find 'em now, dream 'em now
Without this magical,
impossible thing...
that everyone has except for me
I'm longing for something...
Something so sacred,
it brings love to it's knees...
Copyright ©
ThePumpkinKing
... [
2004-05-23 19:13:50]
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Re: With Longing
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 07:20:17 PM AEST
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"And now it seems my life is full,
of emptiness"
I love the way this line is stuctured; it led me in one direction, and then ended in irony. I appreciate little things like that, and this emotional write was a great piece that was hard not to enjoy. Thank you so much. |
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Re: With Longing
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by TheNextRobertFrost on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 07:43:22 PM AEST
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| This poem is a good read |
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Re: With Longing
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 07:51:35 PM AEST
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this is so brilliant, great images, beautifully written, and flowed so well! hugs n' love nessa
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