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Why you
Contributed by
TiNyOnE
on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 02:30:00 PM in AEST
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Why did this happen? It wasnt suppose to? I
was suppose to be single and happy until
that day I saw you. You gave me this look
that caught my eye, and just being friends
isn't keeping me satisified. Why did you
come up to me if you had a girl, why do you
give me this look like you want me in your
world? Why did I start to like you and have
you on my mind. Why can't I be her? Why can't
you be mine? From the second week of school
I already knew. Throughout the whole school
year I was going to be feeling you. Why
can't this be easy and not be so hard? Why
can't I not fall for the cutest out of all?
Why you out of thousands in this school? My
head wanted to make the final verdict but my
heart over ruled.
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TiNyOnE
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2002-10-10 14:30:00]
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Re: Why you
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by MisterRight on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 02:48:01 PM AEST
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Oh My God!!! This is a great poem... if you replaced all the "girls" with "guys" and all the "hers" with "hims" and "school" to "work" this poem is damn close to my life. Great write!
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Re: Why you
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by TiNyOnE on
Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 09:22:01 AM AEST
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| Thank you very much. your the first person to every respond to my poem. thanks |
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Re: Why you
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by RealCrystal on
Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 08:49:34 PM AEST
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| This is such a great poem, spoken from the heart, and I know cause Ive been in that exact same situation. Well that was before I looked around and found out there is always someone better staring at you from around the corner. |
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Re: Why you
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by Shabby on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 05:49:48 AM AEST
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| takes me back to high school...you nailed all the emotions in this poem....good job |
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