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*Perspective*

Contributed by Twitch06 on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 05:03:17 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Killing yourself takes no pride.
You never get to see the world with your very young eyes.
You need to see whats beyond
Your front door and look to see whats really out there.
I think I should take my own advice,
For I have wanted to take "my last breath" too.
Take life to the fullest extent and see for yourself,
For that it is better to live and see the world,
Instead of standing at your door step and looking,
Into the world you already know.
But it's still hard to face the world
Hurting is my only way out
No one can stop me now
I should just end my life right now.
But that wouldnt solve a thing
I know that People love me
But they dont show it often
If they did, my life would be happy
What have I done to make people love me?
Why do they like me so much?
I know that my life has just begun
And now I like the world that I see
But why do people still like me?
I have seen a lot of disgrace in my life
But that is long gone now
I see the world in a new light
And I'm glad that things have changed
I'm no longer standing on the outside
But on the inside looking out
My view is different now
And I feel better about myself
People love me
And thats all I need
I'm going to live my life now

Copyright © Twitch06 ... [ 2004-05-23 17:03:17]
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Re: *Perspective* (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 10:12:39 PM AEST
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Bravo!! Emotional solidity is rearing it head. Life may not be perfect but it is better than the alternative. Great work here.

Rita

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