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~ FOUNTAIN ~
Contributed by
AnGeL_M
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Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:43:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Fountain,
Lit with the rays,
Of the moon rising up,
Turning the droplets to crystals,
Like blue sapphires emanating with light,
Casting ripples on the surface,
Of the cool, clear waters,
Beneath the night,
Fountain.
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AnGeL_M
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2004-05-23 12:43:34]
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Re: ~ FOUNTAIN ~
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by reilt on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:52:32 PM AEST
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| beautiful. i thought this was just lovely. |
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Re: ~ FOUNTAIN ~
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 03:48:12 PM AEST
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very pretty:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: ~ FOUNTAIN ~
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by shelby on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 05:11:16 PM AEST
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so serene and tender
Michelle |
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Re: ~ FOUNTAIN ~
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by shelby on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 05:13:03 PM AEST
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so serene and tender
Michelle |
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Re: ~ FOUNTAIN ~
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 08:57:26 PM AEST
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| Beautiful, beautiful poem. The words gloriously flowing with captivation. Great write. I absolutely loved the imagery. |
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Re: ~ FOUNTAIN ~
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by emystar on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 01:15:18 AM AEST
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Very nice.
uv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: ~ FOUNTAIN ~
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by Rylo on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:32:30 PM AEST
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| This was really beautiful, very short, and just splended. You always seem to amaze me with your talent. Great job, love Ronald. |
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