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Girl in the glass bottle
Contributed by
carmen_queasy
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Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:27:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This bubble is fragile and sure to burst
Not big enough for the two of us
But wait, one person can’t survive alone
Yet neither can survive in oxygen
Tell me a story
A story of love
Again, about the girl in the glass bottle
There’s no way out, no ***** way out
But everyone stands to stare
This insatiably beautiful creature
Naked and bare, my pretty little nightmare
We’ll all just stare, she doesn’t care
She won’t complain, she wouldn’t dare
I am the girl in the glass bottle
Watch my every move, but take no step closer
No dear, don’t you move closer
The glass will stop you and protect me from love
This is the girl in the bottle
A bottle of hate to stop the love
Don’t get close, please don’t let me love
The glass won’t let you get close enough
I am the girl in the glass bottle
I could break this brittle glass like crumbling dirt
But then as I climb out and be free to love
The broken shards will leave me hurt
This bubble of love is sure to burst
But before that happens I’ll pop it first.
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Re: Girl in the glass bottle
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:38:02 PM AEST
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interesting.
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Re: Girl in the glass bottle
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by reilt on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:38:21 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. really really impressive. |
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Re: Girl in the glass bottle
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by Mortis-Dark on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:13:33 PM AEST
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This is a poem we can all relate to. Wonderful write.
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Re: Girl in the glass bottle
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 09:16:00 PM AEST
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sounds like its too late, but remember this;
"Fear can stop you loving,
Love can stop your fear."
Enigma
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