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Asylum High (part 3)
Contributed by
Vermillion
on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 10:40:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Asylum High
(part 3)
immunity
your medication is taking less affect
the serum in the needle point is being less direct
my mind is no longer clouded with artificial life
my memories are coming back, the feeling of that knife
the one I used to kill my parents almost 10 years ago
my brother, that night, and the old dirt road
and now I remember who I really am
I was the child butcher and now I’m the serial killing madman
open cage, open mind
got the key, to set me free
open up the cell, so I can leave
all those guards, silent alarm
they are my art and I mean them harm
I’m a soul stealer, a professional killer
they said I was insane so I better deliver
a new knife in my hand, a new life I can disband
soon the whole world will know who I am
closed cage, closed mind
open cage, open mind
the Darkwater massacre
Darkwater
I’m your doctor and I’m hotter than hell
mountain mist
I’m a therapist, a lunatic from the cell
mission
I’m a physician with an ambition for knives
tables turnin’
I’m a surgeon and were learner to die
so many left dead in the wake
holding my knives I know its fate
this is my mission I know for sure
perhaps I should go on a world tour
tell everyone about the people I’ve been killin’
tell everyone about the blood that’s been spillin’
soon everyone will know my name....Vermillion
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Vermillion
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2004-05-23 10:40:56]
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Re: Asylum High (part 3)
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 11:27:28 AM AEST
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WOW.... thats all I'll say is WOW....you'll get the hint somehow...keep it up...keep it coming
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Re: Asylum High (part 3)
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:23:50 PM AEST
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we're all just rats in a cage, waiting for the next test.
this was good.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Asylum High (part 3)
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by brigitte7735 on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 04:54:49 PM AEST
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You know i love this, i dont know why im so fascinated by the darker side of human nature, and in a "silence of the lambs" way got all caught up in the seriel killer as the hero...but that last line, scared me, jolted me back into reality. Like your conscience is suddenly forced to deal with the fact that you've been taking such pleasure in the torment of others. Brilliant.
Vanessa |
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Re: Asylum High (part 3)
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by shorty_52 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:42:55 PM AEST
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wow!!! this is really good. creepy. but still really good. i love u poetry still!!!!
~allyson~ |
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Re: Asylum High (part 3)
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by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 05:55:25 PM AEST
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| SQUEE OMG you made me squeal, that was AWESOME! AMAZING! I can't breathe! WOAH! I NEED MY INHALER! BUT I DONT HAVE ONE! |
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