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Peace
Contributed by
tamilyn
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Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 09:31:56 AM in AEST
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The night darkens to shadows
The moon and stars do shine
Over land and water
In these, our troubled times
And God up in his Heaven
Speaks down into the night
To moon and stars he whispers
"You must cast down your light
Let light glow down upon them
And radiate their souls
The shimmer of your beauty
Will make my people whole"
And then the angels sang out loud
Their voices of rejoice
The moon, the stars, the angels
Inspired by one voice
The night gave way to morning dew
The sun did rise again
And the light that flowed from Heaven
Brought peace to man again
Copyright: Tammy Hendershot
2004
Copyright ©
tamilyn
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2004-05-23 09:31:56]
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Re: Peace
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by pixie on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 09:34:36 AM AEST
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Hi there Tammy,
This was just beautiful,.great write.
pixie xx |
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Re: Peace
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 09:48:57 AM AEST
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what a beautiful poem and thought...your inner light shines bright here
Shari |
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Re: Peace
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by Baronhawk on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:03:35 AM AEST
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Very nicely done. Technically I like this poem it has a clean and clear structure and flows easily as I read it. The message aand subject matter too is of noble caliber but though I admire that stance I can only say dream on...dream on...the stars and the moon has lighted the skies of the night for ages and yet none did it do to curb the astrocities of human souls. Again a nice poem!
"Peace, that delicate timbre that we often try to emulate within the music of humanity's symphony...and yet such discordant clamour are all that we find among the shores of insatiable human eddies..." |
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Re: Peace
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by laststarontheleft on
Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 07:16:01 AM AEST
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What lovely poetry is this i read before me!
Beautiful write, well done
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