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Smoke
Contributed by
ElleH
on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 05:38:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Do you mind my smoking here?
you have looked at me
And smiled FOR AT ONCE
Nothing else
I smiled to u
And I have gone with u
I smiled to u
And I have gone with u
Do u mind my smoking here
I was looking
for
Someone else
I took myself
In my hand
And I have gone
By myself
*******
Copyright ©
ElleH
... [
2004-05-23 05:38:39]
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Re: Smoke
(User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 08:11:53 AM AEST
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| wow this confudled me but i liked it alot very witty |
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Re: Smoke
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 09:13:39 AM AEST
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interesting...... hugs n' love nessa
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