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They are great firefighters...........
Contributed by
ravisada
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Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:39:58 AM in AEST
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The firefighter's stories hold many sad memories
The lives that they save is immeasurable in value
They work round the clock to save the nation
And they do their best to protect us from tragedies
When we see them going home from fighting fire
they look exhaust and the smoke overwhelms them
They are wonderful human beings
who save lives from tragedy
And their strength of spirits lead them to do or die
They are always dedicated to their job and do their best
Their determination to the nation keeps us safe
When they leave home they carry prayers
from their loved one's
When they don't return their home is filled
with their loved one's tears
The firefighters are the brave people on earth and
they risk their life for someone else happiness
Because their heart is made of precious gold.
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright ©2004 Ravi Sathasivam
Copyright ©
ravisada
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2004-05-23 02:39:58]
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Re: They are great firefighters...........
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 05:50:26 AM AEST
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| Sad, but beautifully well written. |
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Re: They are great firefighters...........
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by Cole on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:34:22 PM AEST
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| This should be a journal entry or an essay. It is beautiful and very touching. The firefighters deserve so much of our thanks, but this poem is just not really a poem. A poem needs certain qualities. This just sounds like sentences written in poem form. This does have a lot of potential though. If you could just rewords somethings and rearrange it a bit so that it's not just sentence after sentence after sentence, I can see it being so much better. |
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