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UNFORSEEABLE LOVE
Contributed by
Freda_Burrel
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Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 11:19:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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a stolen heart,
unbreakable will.
together at once,
unloveable still.
the passions unwind,
as it may seem.
to feel a love,
that it's never seen.
the heart of one,
was purposely hurt.
but still takes a chance,
with danger it'll flirt.
a theft of one ,
will break the two.
unforseeable danger,
brought on by you.
Copyright ©
Freda_Burrel
... [
2004-05-22 23:19:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: UNFORSEEABLE LOVE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 11:31:08 PM AEST (User
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Wow. Concise - but full and powerful. Very nicely written! |
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Re: UNFORSEEABLE LOVE
(User Rating: 1 ) by AspenGlow on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 04:02:58 AM AEST (User
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See past the flirt or be crushed and hurt.
I like the flow of this, and the message. Thanks for sharing. |
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