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Tributary of a Painted Emotion
Contributed by
indiradesha
on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 10:32:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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My soul absorbs the light that
flutters from your eyelashes.
Your fragrant smile drifts into my pores,
each breath thanking you.
I sleep intertwined with dreams of
our colours undulating beneath the sheets.
Copyright ©
indiradesha
... [
2004-05-22 22:32:58]
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Re: Tributary of a Painted Emotion
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:43:07 AM AEST
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absolutely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Tributary of a Painted Emotion
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by bernard on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:23:55 PM AEST
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Short and refreshing.
bernard. |
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Re: Tributary of a Painted Emotion
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by eatfresh22 on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 02:10:27 PM AEST
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Quick, yet so powerful. I love the third line; it's so poetic. The title is nice too.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Tributary of a Painted Emotion
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by venkat on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 03:46:34 AM AEST
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| wow..beautifully poetic. venkat |
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