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Gone

Contributed by Nickibabe421 on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:45:16 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



No one understands,
all the crap I go thorugh.
I try and do my best,
But that just doesn't seem to do.

I think about the end,
so many times a day.
I honestly tried to get help,
But I just didn't know what to say.

But no one tried to help me,
If you did, then I guess you failed.
You didn't try your hardest,
Like everyone else, you balied.

I'm sorry I have a problem,
and sorry you pretened to care.
But if you didn't want to help, then why'd you try?
Cause, darn it, it just ain't fair!

It ain't fair to me,
that you pretended to be my friend.
I told you everything,
And now this is how it has to end!

I tell myself everyday.
"Just face it no one likes you."
Then I got some new "friends"
That made that statement true.

But you all just brushed me off,
as if i wasn't worth your time.
Oh I'm sorry,
I didn't know asking for help was such a crime!

But don't worry, I'll help you out,
You don't even need to care.
Just imagine, no wait realize,
Your life without me there!




Copyright © Nickibabe421 ... [ 2004-05-22 21:45:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 10:35:52 PM AEST
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OMG!!!! I love this so much...it is totally my story...its like so uncanny how you wrote that yet it is so like what I have recently been going through...I have a problem...which is yes "cutting" and my friend found out by my ex and totally pretended that she cared...then one night totally dumped on me...and omg that totally I dont know she pushed me off the edge...it was like she didnt want me there anymmore...she wanted me gone...like she knew I'd cut if she told me all that...and she was so right...but yeah you know life is the most practical thing you can imagine...and thats what *****es me off!!! andyways I love this write...please write more...
read and comment mine...if you want...
xoxo -Danielle


Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Dierna on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:35:42 AM AEST
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That is EXACTLY how I used to be! I even have the friend that "pretended" to care for so long....she still does, but I know the truth: She don't give 2 ***** about me. But then I found someone that REALLY does care.....my sister. ((if you read my poems, she's the one they're all about. lol.)) And I know she really does because everything she has done or said, has been in her eyes for my best interest. ((one of them is not, but she believes it is. And that's just the one)) But thank you for writing this.....it made me realize who I was and who I'm going to be, in a way. So thank you. ((Lol. this has MAJORLY helped me get my guide off my back about that....lol.))
-Dierna


Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:01:01 PM AEST
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very well written. you really captured the hopeless teenage anger/depression we all go thru *applause*




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