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Wasn't Myself
Contributed by
essentially9
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Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:52:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Wasn't Myself
I wasn't myself
I was acting
Just for you
But I realize
That you've fallen
For a nonexistent
They never existed
How can I reveal
The truth after this
The lies and hiding
You've fallen
For another person
I don't know
What to do anymore
How to tell you
What you need to know
The love runs deep
In deceit
I wasn't myself
But it will be you
To pay the price
For my mistake
I have the debt to pay
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essentially9
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2004-05-22 20:52:41]
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Re: Wasn't Myself
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:58:13 PM AEST
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Ouch. This reminds me of the actor I wrote about in "The Actor" (which I posted today but wrote quite a while ago). He sometimes seems to show remorse for what he's done...but that's really rare. Usually, he just goes after other girls... there are countless others that he's done this sort of thing to.
Great write. It flows well. I like the poem and I'm glad you've never actually done that.
Bravo and encore.
Love,
Chelsea |
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Re: Wasn't Myself
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 07:03:43 PM AEST
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| Very deep write..Your words here I am could hit home to many people..But you always seem to hit nails on the head right off..I think your style and why I admire your skill so damn much is you remind me alot of someone Great..Well Myself really..Good job doll. |
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