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Contributed by
nebill
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Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 09:45:00 AM in AEST
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Visited this site,
To see a friends work.
And maybe kill a little time.
Now I find myself coming back.
Again, and again.
To open up my mind.
Words by Lia and Springchic.
Herbleaf and Pickles,
Maynard, WordPoet and Muse.
Some of it is whimsical,
Puts a smile on your face,
Just a clever little ruse.
Some of it is dark
and brooding,
And I wonder why
Some of the odes,
Have touched me deeply.
And brought a tear to my eye.
Or seem to be written...
About things I am feeling.
How can this person be seeing?
How can this poet
Write these words
Probe the very depths of my being?
Crude attempts of my own,
Cautiously posted,
Have gotten kind review.
Many thoughts of mine,
I would love to share,
And might, as spirits renew.
Baring my soul to all,
Is a scary thing to do,
But here it does seem right,
So thanks to the poets,
And thanks to Mick,
For having this wonderful site.
Copyright ©
nebill
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2002-10-10 09:45:00]
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Re: your-poetry.com
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 09:56:14 AM AEST
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| I guess you have your favorites, hope you read mine someday |
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Re: your-poetry.com
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by Lia on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 10:30:32 AM AEST
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| I like this Bill..it's great...and Val...it wasn't favorites he was picking...looked to me like they were right off the homepage :)...your work is quite impressive. Keep writing Bill!!!! |
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Re: your-poetry.com
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by nebill on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 10:34:10 AM AEST
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| Didn't mean to exclude anyone...but including everyone might have made a record length poem! Just went to the forums, and grabbed the first few names I saw! |
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Re: your-poetry.com
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 11:16:01 AM AEST
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Glad you like it here, nebill..hope you'll stay.. We do have a lot of talent here..and a place to share our hearts.....
Jenni |
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Re: your-poetry.com
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 11:41:19 AM AEST
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| Nice poem its great for the site! I could'nt have said it beter myself!! Great work! hope you read mine as well! LOL |
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Re: your-poetry.com
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 02:06:54 PM AEST
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I know Nebill, I was only kidding, hope you like it here, and welcome, (don't take things to serious, we all have fun here,) congrads'
you just meet your new family ( us Poets) |
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Re: your-poetry.com
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by herbleaf23 on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 05:26:21 PM AEST
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excellent, i've only been here a day and i'm already name-dropped in a piece. hell yeah, nebill, right on!
ok so what if you were just picking names at random of the homepage.... good enough for me!!
don't be shy about putting your stuff up, even if some jerky like me says something bad about it, doesn't even matter, as long as you're feeling what you're writing and you enjoy reading it, then keep on keepin on. and keep on sharing.
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Re: your-poetry.com
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 08:41:33 AM AEST
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I totally agree with your second last verse re sharing your soul is a scary thing to do (with the outside world) .... but in here I feel comfortable as well - like being with friends who understand exactly how you feel. I have never read so many poems in my life that have totally reflected my exact feelings. It is really mind-blowing. I have kept most of my poems to myself, but find I can now share them in here without a worry.
Thanks Mick and poetry dot com.
Great poem nebill. |
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