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My Road Of Nothingness
Contributed by
-thesiscokid-
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Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 06:50:46 PM in AEST
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My life has been a long road of nothingness.
Nobody even cares anymore.
THe one person I need most,
Feels nothing for me.
And my fellow brothers,
Don't care like I do.
Nobody cares like I do.
Nobody do I show.
How I feel, deep down inside.
For I've been a lost soul.
Walking down the road to nothingness.
I'd like to see how it would feel.
TO be loved, or praised, or even held.
Maybe I must accept the fact,
That I was meant to walk alone.
No one will ever know what I feel.
Because the fact is that,
I can't seem to let anyone in.
No one could if they even tried.
I have even locked my own self out.
Of everything I've ever known.
I starting to go back now,
TO where I know I shouldn't go.
Back to place of honest deception.
WHere maybe I will be at peace.
Content with feeling bad for myself,
Going back on the road to nothingness.
And I hate it so much.
Won't you walk with me?
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Re: My Road Of Nothingness
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:55:39 PM AEST
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You know... this write has struck a cord w/ me... this could have been me a week ago... b/c this is exactly how I felt my life was going... nowhere fast...
Great write... u've put your whole heart into it... I can feel the emotions surfacing w/ each word... w/ each line... It's like a wave rising and falling throughout... Great write... consider urself praised for a job well done...
~Donna~ |
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Re: My Road Of Nothingness
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 10:56:58 PM AEST
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| amazing piece and emotion. life is meant to be alone. you feel whatever you feel alone, you were born alone, you will die alone. you will have people around you, but they are not with you. im on the road of pointlessness, and its not much better. |
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