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Fire Burning Inside
Contributed by
DirtyFool
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Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 06:33:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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My hate for you,
Is like fire,
Burning greater and greater,
With every word you say,
With everything you do,
You spark the fire more and more,
I can't stop it,
The fie is uncontrolable,
Can the flame ever be put out,
Can I ever love you like I want to,
Will you ever treat me right,
Your adding to the fire every night,
Look at what you have done,
Does it make you happy,
To see me so down,
Does it make you feel better,
To make me feel worse,
Will things ever change,
Or will the fire inside of me,
Forever remain
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DirtyFool
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2004-05-22 18:33:17]
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Re: Fire Burning Inside
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by Archie on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 06:39:33 PM AEST
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"What ever happened to the days of forgiveness;
grudges and quarrels all around me I see.
Saying your sorry seems to make you a weakling"
It makes me so sick all I do is grieve"
When you learn to give your heart
it always gets stomped on,
but that's no reason to write angry poems. |
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Re: Fire Burning Inside
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by Dierna on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 07:03:40 PM AEST
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That describes perfectly my feelings towards my mother at this time...thank you for writing it.
And angry poems are a way to express your anger with out lashing out at people. |
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Re: Fire Burning Inside
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:39:32 PM AEST
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| just remember the fire can burn you alive or them alive. it will happen to either of you. yeah i bet you werent expecting this comment! well great write. nice indeedy. |
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