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What I Did DO
Contributed by
bitson_2005
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Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 05:00:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I just don't seem to understand,
why I'm sad right here at hand.
My very best friend is mad at me,
I feel like leaving and climbing a tree.
Her fury shows in her angry eyes,
what did i do to recieve her dispise?
Was it something I said, or something
i did; was it a lie, or a rumor, or
something of mid?
Maybe I just got way too close, she's
the only one who really knows.
Whatever the reason she's mad at me,
maybe I should just let it be.
I can not let it be right now, I need
to apologize some way, somehow.
I'm really sorry for whatever I did, I
hope your heart can forgive my actions
of mid.
Please forgive me I beg of you, I'm realy
sorry for what I did do.
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2004-05-22 17:00:24]
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Re: What I Did DO
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 05:34:43 PM AEST
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I sense a lack of good, healthy communication here. The poem is very direct and has a nice flow about it. Nicely done. Bravo and encore!
Love,
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Re: What I Did DO
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by fairy-of-ice on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:10:37 PM AEST
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| wow this poem really made me think, as i am in the position of your friend. i really enjoyed this poem, it allowed me to see from a different view. i love this idea of leaving and climbing a tree!! good write. |
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