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Is it me? Hell will see...
Contributed by
another_dimension
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Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 04:17:13 PM in AEST
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Time will tell
I sing it loud
Will all be well?
Forsaken souls
reek no benefits of honesty
In this world
Forgotten peace
silly girl
Will be forgotten
If she does not wake up in time
FOR THE JUDGEMENT
is soon
It will be all over
THE END IS EXTREMELY ***** NIGH
good old film quotes
rule the lives of most
Poor ghosts
IT IS YOUR FAULT
Heaven will not take me
Hell i doubt will too
The Devil and God have discussed that
Earth is a greater punishment
Than Hell
Will all be well?
Time will tell
But i doubt it
haha
I extremely ***** doubt it.
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another_dimension
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Re: Is it me? Hell will see...
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 04:22:35 PM AEST
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cool write.
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Re: Is it me? Hell will see...
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by Archie on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 04:27:48 PM AEST
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| Wierd, I think I know what song you were listening to. I believe hell is a place far different than earth, never mind, your poem was interesting, indicative Nirvana. 4 stars |
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Re: Is it me? Hell will see...
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 05:41:24 PM AEST
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Interesting write...so glad we serve a God of grace and mercy.
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Re: Is it me? Hell will see...
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 06:02:35 PM AEST
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| Yeah, Nirvana rocks! they're the best! By any chance were you listening to Lake of Fire? Just an observation... I love that song. Cool poem, by the way. |
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Re: Is it me? Hell will see...
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by brigitte7735 on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 04:06:03 PM AEST
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I love the line about " good old film quotes rule the lives of most".
Vanessa |
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