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Letting You Go
Contributed by
changito
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Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Letting you Go
It's hard to keep going with out you,
Day after day I think how great you where,
taking comfort in knowing that I might find true love,
I'll find a way
I will move on to find a new fate,
I might find someone new like you,
But my one chance is gone,
I will let you go,
Hope you find someone new,
I just want you know before I go,
That I still love you.
By: Jorge Uch
A.K.A Changito
C/O 03
Copyright ©
changito
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2002-10-10 09:00:00]
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Re: Letting You Go
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 11:47:07 AM AEST
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| Nice poem kinda wish it was longer!! Keep writing! |
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Re: Letting You Go
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 03:10:02 PM AEST
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| I thought it was well, but lowman613 is right. keeping writiing |
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Re: Letting You Go
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by herbleaf23 on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 06:41:51 PM AEST
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hey mang, it's actually not that bad, just keep writing and it will only get better. BTW, I'm guessing "where" was actually supposed to be "were", that's what made sense to me while reading it, but i'm not sure. anyways don't be afraid of what idiots like me think, enjoy what you do and be happy doing it.
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Re: Letting You Go
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by Clarity on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 09:33:54 PM AEST
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this is really pretty...but i agree with everyone else, keep writing
jen |
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