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Life Of A Doormat
Contributed by
parkman
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Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 01:32:39 PM in AEST
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The life of a doormat, lying at the door
Looking up at the shoes, stamping really sore
Rubbing dirt in it's face, hurting more than it's pride
The doormat will not shout, it's feelings it will hide
It's lay at this door, for many a year
Being kicked on the head, shedding many a tear
Pain it has felt, so much on this step
Being bruised and beaten, a secret well kept
But the doormat will rise, with venom and spit
The shoe that comes down, won't know what's hit it
As the bristles rise, razor sharp by the score
The doormat will stand proud, taking no more
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-05-22 13:32:39]
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Re: Life Of A Doormat
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by Princesaazul16 on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 01:34:54 PM AEST
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I liked this poem, i thought it was cool. Keep up the good work.
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Re: Life Of A Doormat
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by screwup on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 01:39:54 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem's inner meaning... I know how it feels. Keep up the good work, love to hear more. |
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Re: Life Of A Doormat
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 03:57:14 PM AEST
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I absolutely loved this...Great personification..
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Re: Life Of A Doormat
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by TwEeK on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 05:36:34 PM AEST
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i did a poem like this too! but i must say i liked yours waaaayyy better!
loved this one alot!
you described me much better than i did myself!
Tweek |
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