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Questions of Love
Contributed by
wordpoet
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Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Can I love you more than I do today?
Will this awkward feeling ever go away?
Should I tell you all that’s been on my mind?
Would you get upset or be mild and kind?
Would you love me too if you knew my heart?
Or would you turn your back and leave us miles apart?
Do I have the courage for my dreams to come true?
All I’m really waiting for is a sign from you.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: Questions of Love
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by MisterRight on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 02:27:41 PM AEST
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I really liked this! Question, is this written to a secret love of yours or was it just a thought so you chose to write about it?
Beautiful either way.
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Re: Questions of Love
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by herbleaf23 on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 05:32:00 PM AEST
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not bad... not great, but not bad. and definitely not very short. this is short...
Let Go
constantly being taught how to let go.
fighting my deepest desire to hang on.
yup, that's it. now THAT's short.
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Re: Questions of Love
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by WordPoet on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 10:42:54 PM AEST
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| Let's just say these questions have been running around my head for awhile. |
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Re: Questions of Love
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by Lia on
Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 01:02:20 PM AEST
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| *winks@doug* good job on this one..I like it...I have been busy lately and have been absent so I am catching up on reading and commenting..at least trying to lol.. |
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