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I Remember
Contributed by
kailadragon
on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:04:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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on the nights
when the moon is a sliver of silver in the sky
and the silence is comforting
I cry
on the nights
when the stars are sprinkled across the sky
and the trees sway to Nature's rythm
I dance
on the nights
the moon is full and round
and the ground is soft and cool
I remember
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2004-05-22 12:04:07] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:05:31 PM AEST (User
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Au contraire my friend , this is well written.
Nice job. |
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Re: I Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:08:41 PM AEST (User
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I agree this is a wonderful poem, it reminds me of every night im forced to remember.... |
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Re: I Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by alecfernadez on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:08:49 PM AEST (User
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dont be hard on urself or modest, this is a really good short and sweet poem. Remember modesty killed the cat |
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Re: I Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by fallensilence on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:23:42 PM AEST (User
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you've made a fan of me.-david |
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Re: I Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobbyclay56 on
Saturday, 22nd October 2011 @ 02:23:08 PM AEST (User
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Too simple for what it had to say did not really care for it sorry |
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