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What's the Point
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 11:57:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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What's the point
of looking for something
when you know there's nothing to find
what's the point of wishing for snow
in the middle of July
what's the point
of hoping for something
when you know it'll never come true
what's the point
of sticking around
when i'll never be with you
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kailadragon
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2004-05-22 11:57:33]
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Re: What's the Point
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:02:43 PM AEST
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| I found this poem a little sad. but a good write. |
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Re: What's the Point
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by pixie on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:03:46 PM AEST
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Very sad poem, you captured the pain and put it onto paper well tho.............
I'm sorry you are feeling so much pain at the moment, things will get better!! (((HUGS)))
Pixie xxx
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Re: What's the Point
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by alecfernadez on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:10:00 PM AEST
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I liked this, exspecially the line,
"...Whats the point of wishing for snow
In the middle of July..."
Cool. Keep your chin up and keep banging out poetry as good as this! |
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