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You Helped Me To Live
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 10:09:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I was dead
inside,
An empty
lonely
shell,
walking around
with no feelings,
no hope.
But you came and
saved me.
You filled me with
love and
filled me with
life.
You taught me to feel,
forced me to hope,
made me keep existing.
Now I'm real,
you fixed my
broken soul.
You complete my heart
and help me to live.
I love you more than I can
ever show.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-05-22 10:09:54]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: You Helped Me To Live
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 11:36:55 AM AEST
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Hey....I really liked this... the run-on lines gave the poem a very strong effect... well done!!
Jenni |
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Re: You Helped Me To Live
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 11:56:54 AM AEST
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well, i wouldnt know if it was like evanesence, but i think its very pretty:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: You Helped Me To Live
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by alecfernadez on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:11:53 PM AEST
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| brilliant! It sorta sounds like evernesance, the same pessamism to optomism thing. My latest poem has the same beat as Chloroform Perfume by from atumn to ashes. Unintentionally |
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Re: You Helped Me To Live
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:59:43 PM AEST
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| very beautiful... great job.... reads like you pulled something out of MY heart... I can relate to this totally... thanks for putting it to words... |
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