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Looking in
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:38:27 AM in AEST
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Chorus
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Look in without me.
Look out at me.
What can be right now.
All this ***** is said and done.
Nothing to go back on.
Just a terrible instinct.
Just another damn dream.
Just another terrible instinct.
I want a taste of reality.
Verse 1
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We caused each other so much pain.
We were never one in the same.
Pointing fingers at the one to blame.
Doing the things we loved to hate.
Nothing will ever consildate.
I wished for more.
More than either of us had to offer.
[So much more so much more]
Never again will things be the same.
[No never no never no never again]
Chorus
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Look in without me.
Look out at me.
What can be right now.
All this ***** is said and done.
Nothing to go back on.
Just a terrible instinct.
Just another damn dream.
Just another terrible instinct.
I want a taste of reality.
Verse 2
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We cant go back.
We cant move on.
I know that were stuck here in this moment.
What can I do.
What can I say.
Just to be with you one more time.
[Just one more, Just one more time]
O someone help me.
Im losing it all again.
Nothing has changed.
Everythings the same.
But the better is for the worst.
Chorus
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Look in without me.
Look out at me.
What can be right now.
All this ***** is said and done.
Nothing to go back on.
Just a terrible instinct.
Just another damn dream.
Just another terrible instinct.
I want a taste of reality.
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
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2004-05-22 09:38:27]
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Re: Looking in
(User Rating: 1 )
by poet_of_anger on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:45:16 AM AEST
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| Very nice, but slightly sad, but very well written. I hope it is a rock song, personally, i can see it being a great song. |
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Re: Looking in
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 10:00:30 AM AEST
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| Great write Mortis... I agree this WOULD make a great song... glad you're still posting... keep it up! |
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Re: Looking in
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 10:45:44 AM AEST
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heartfelt and full of feeling, i can see you put much into this, and can hear the tune, its wonderful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Looking in
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by alecfernadez on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 11:20:47 AM AEST
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| this would make a brilliant song, definate rock, it could be a classic |
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