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BrokenFixed
Contributed by
reilt
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Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:17:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Broken...
The words, they come out wrong.
You're tired and you're beautiful
But what's forgiveness
When she's flooded?
There's sorrow with a name,
Wrapped tight
And you're just round her finger.
Is that enough?
It's cramped and small and dark.
Shattered.
And it's the unquiet, inside,
That haunts and hounds her
Both.
You can lie beside the mistake
And kiss it better.
You're lovely and you're innocent
But what's letting go of it
When she's swallowed?
There's pain with a device
To starve her of your love,
No matter how
You try to make it right.
It's between the black and white,
You and him,
The good, the bad
That's left her in this state.
Needin of and willing to be
Fixed.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-05-22 09:17:18]
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Re: BrokenFixed
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by carmen_queasy on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:36:13 PM AEST
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Re: BrokenFixed
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by bernard on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:50:19 PM AEST
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Good strong poem. Thanks for sharing.
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