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Cold Rain
Contributed by
merry
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Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:56:34 AM in AEST
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Cold rain washes gray drudgery over dreams
Instincts dulled by over thinking every thought
Rituals no longer adequate to soothe frayed nerves
The pen stills in the hand; faucet drips smug words
Mocking any attempt to stop the ebb of emotions
Derelict unwashed masses gather at my grave
Waiting to be paid for their tears
My eyes peer through haze of deceit
Desperate wallpaper disguises, layer upon layer
Scrape with bleeding fingers to break free
I am both the prisoner and the jailer
Fooled by ego and arrogance, a dangerous concoction of youth
Strained by sympathy to forever make amends
Cold rain fills my mouth, drowns out my screams
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merry
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2004-05-22 08:56:34]
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Re: Cold Rain
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 10:36:21 AM AEST
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awww so sad gaille, the loneliness just jumps out, a most vivid excellent poem, i almost didnt like rain for a minute reading this lol, ill send you my sun and you send me your rain, and we'll both be happy today, huggies, smiles, woofies, and loves ya sis, nessa
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Re: Cold Rain
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by Archie on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:50:59 PM AEST
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"Even through all of this you will be okay
day still follows night
and hope still comes from tomorrow
dark clouds will fade and so will sorrow
and joy will be renewed when trials are done" |
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Re: Cold Rain
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:16:29 AM AEST
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| Awww this just touched me so deeply tonight ... been feeling this way too for so long ... and you always express my every emotion with such perfection, it's scary ... hugs Jan |
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Re: Cold Rain
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by Stitch on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:40:13 AM AEST
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All the things I've felt, but you express them so much better than I ever could. Such a professional polish and yet a realness unsurpassed.
Stitch |
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