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CAN U?
Contributed by
emystar
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Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 04:11:01 AM in AEST
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Signatures By
The Tired Lion
Oh my luv, my pounding heart
Set me free in-luv
Reach way deep down inside.
Set heaven's fire a live.
Can u, free these chains?
Can u, wash away rain?
Can u, seize our destiny?
Can u, run free with me?
We can soar beyond it all
Freeing luv to shine.
Intimately we shall fly
way beyond heaven's sky.
Our sensations, super charge
Planets on-n-on 4-ever.
One touch will melt
Any pain we've ever felt.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-05-22 04:11:01]
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Re: CAN U?
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by venkat on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 04:38:42 AM AEST
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| Aaah..what an enchanting romantic invitation..lovely poem.:-) venkat |
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Re: CAN U?
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by bernard on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 04:58:15 AM AEST
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Do not wonder make it come true, Lovely poem.
bernard |
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by Aika on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:03:38 AM AEST
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| oh god! i have a happy day... such beautiful poems reading today... this is sooo lovely, caught me completely!!! i loved it!!§ With love, aika:-) |
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by pixie on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:24:58 AM AEST
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Mmmmmm all I can say is lovely :O)
pixie xxx |
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Re: CAN U?
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by JT on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:29:08 AM AEST
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a sweet write.
Beyond heavens sky.....what an image
-jt- |
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Re: CAN U?
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:44:18 AM AEST
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WooHoo Grrlfriend...you're on a roll!!!
Go For IT!!!
Hugs and luv and encouragement..
Jenni |
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Re: CAN U?
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:14:56 AM AEST
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What A Beautifull Romantic Write Emy !!!!!
Loved It !!!!! Keep Em Coming G/F :-)
Hugs, Love & God Bless
LoVe - AnGeL |
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Re: CAN U?
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:39:58 AM AEST
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| Oh yes the sensations of melting .....sweet. |
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Re: CAN U?
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 03:37:55 AM AEST
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oh emy girl, this is beautifully romantic:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: CAN U?
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:21:25 AM AEST
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| Hopefully he will hear your call ... you deserve a life together of happiness ... hugs Jan |
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Re: CAN U?
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by Twisterchaser on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 11:19:48 PM AEST
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Alive, Vribrant, Wonderful...what a delight to read.
Andy |
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Re: CAN U?
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 03:34:52 AM AEST
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Little Emy, this was so only romantic......but erotic too! What an imagination you have my dear. Now make that happen......with someone, just he and you! Yipeeeeeeeeeee
I can see you flying around and across the moon.........terrific!
Loved it
mom |
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Re: CAN U?
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by Archie on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 05:34:22 PM AEST
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| I hope the person you wrote this to got the hint |
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Re: CAN U?
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 04:15:24 PM AEST
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Emy, nicely worked. Your words strike a note in me. Ego is best warded off, but still I...
I will read yours to full-fill a beautiful, scenery to enhance my view and to learn...
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Re: CAN U?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 01:32:25 AM AEST
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Aww this is beautiful and cute. Well written and I love the picture it kinda reminds me of...well I dont know but it reminds me of something...(and that makes alot of sense too *rolls eyes*)
Take Care
Hugs 'n Love
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Re: CAN U?
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by blueheart on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 04:05:04 AM AEST
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Beautiful.
How I wish I could find someone that can do all that. |
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by positivelypurple on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 05:59:56 PM AEST
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You took me there! Very nicely done!
Laurel |
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Re: CAN U?
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:18:16 PM AEST
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COOL PICTURE! REALLY MOVING POEM TOO!! I LIKED IT ALOT EMY!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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by uchendu on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:22:36 AM AEST
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| yOU'VE GOT THESE ROMANTIC STUFF COMING ON BETER AND BEST ALL DAY ALONG. YOU HEART IS MANUFACTURING THE POEMS THAT WARM THE HEART OF NEW AND OLD LOVERS. KEEP IT UP! |
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Re: CAN U?
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 03:46:11 AM AEST
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wow, how many years or days or weeks or monthes have you been on this site...your the only one I have seen with that many poems and songs lol GOOD JOB!!!! they are great I have read a few...this one strikes me keep it up and keep them coming...
read and comment my stuff if you want id love to hear what you think...
much love,
Dani
p.s. Im off to read and comment more...keep it up |
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