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Untitled #5
Contributed by
kore
on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 02:29:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Once again I find myself,
mending fractured dreams,
when what I thought was doing well,
isn't what it seemed.
It feels as if I've done it,
a million times before,
entertaining each depressing thought,
and knowing that there's more.
Copyright ©
kore
... [
2004-05-22 02:29:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Untitled #5
(User Rating: 1 ) by DoubleONate on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 05:23:59 AM AEST (User
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(cont. of poem)
But what will happen in the end?
Will you just be a memory to them
Or will your heart truly mend?
I dont know and neither do you,
I just pray you have some hope too!
That was my ending to your poem. Word usage is very nice.... keep on.........like its nobody's business!!!!!!!!! |
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