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Love is a Sickness
Contributed by
TeenageEmoGirl
on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 11:05:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i never quite realized
how exactly weak i am
i bend and break to fit your mold
a mistake, im just left broken.
i hold back tears while you hold her close
i hold back screams when i want you the most
but how can i be real,
when you only like the fake me?
sleepless nights spent
fighting a split personality
half says go on, forget him, it's through
while the other half craves feeling this blue
im lost for words
because you are a unique
piece of Gods work, a freak
of nature, of art,
a hidden masterpiece.
Copyright ©
TeenageEmoGirl
... [
2004-05-21 23:05:33]
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Re: Love is a Sickness
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by Buggsy on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:10:49 AM AEST
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| I really liked this poem. As a reader I sensed pain and despair. Is that why it was written? |
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Re: Love is a Sickness
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by hearmyvoice on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:14:24 AM AEST
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| Nice poem. Conveyed your feelings very well. I know the place you are at, and I know it's terrible |
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Re: Love is a Sickness
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:34:46 AM AEST
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Teen - I've been there. Awful, I know. Nicely captured here! Well done
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Re: Love is a Sickness
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by carmen_queasy on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 11:48:13 AM AEST
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| i love the bitterness of this poem, it rules. |
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