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Unknown Feeling....
Contributed by
luckygal
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Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 10:21:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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What is this feeling I have…
It is a feeling that I cannot explain…
A feeling that… I do not have control of..
A feeling which… I do not understand…
A feeling I feel.. I want it…
Yet cannot have it..
A feeling I feel… I need it…
Yet cannot receive it…
A feeling I feel… I lost it…
But never had it.
Is this feeling caused by you…
Or could it be expressed by me…
Is this feeling deceived by you…
Or could it not be perceived by me…
Is this feeling sure to you…
Or could it be true to me…
This feeling I have…
I could not be sure of what it is..
I know I feel it… but do not understand why.
I know I need it.. but tend to underestimate it…
I know I have it.. yet, it is unknown to me…
I wish I could tell you about this feeling of mine..
But, could not find a way to..
I wish I could share this feeling of mine with you…
But, not sure if you feel the same way too..
I will just keep this unknown feeling of mine..
And just hope that someday you would feel it too….
Till that day… this feeling of mine…
Is just for you… and only you!!!!
To: ..."BMW"...
Copyright ©
luckygal
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2004-05-21 22:21:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Unknown Feeling....
(User Rating: 1 ) by full_blur on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 07:58:36 AM AEST (User
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this poem has quite a unique style. You get across your emotions not only with the ideas, but with the structure of each stanza as well.
really cool! |
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