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If i had wings
Contributed by
bananagurl
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Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:19:46 PM in AEST
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If i had wings, i would fly away,
away from all the pain and sorrow
away from my so called friends that have deceived me
away from my enemies
I would leap up, off of a branch,
and fly away
away from my restrictions,
away from my fears
away from myself
i would fly up into the clouds
away from my life
away from the knives in my back
away from the piercing glares
up up and away!
away from myself,
if only i had wings
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Re: If i had wings
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by TheVoice on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:28:39 PM AEST
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Great write. Sorry you got yelled at again and that you are dealing with so much. If you had wings you could fly high in the sky and drop some p**p right in their eyes. lol
Smile,
The Voice
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Re: If i had wings
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by bananagurl on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:34:23 PM AEST
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| hahaha, no i love my parents to death, i just have trouble dealing with them, and when i do, i write! it is that easy, anyways, thanks alot for your comments! |
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Re: If i had wings
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by angelrae on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:47:48 PM AEST
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| A wonderful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. You do have wings, and one day you will fly, in freedom. Life is hard when you are young, like who you are no matter what. I like you just by reading your poem. |
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Re: If i had wings
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by bananagurl on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:57:19 PM AEST
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| thanx! |
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