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One Trip Ago...

Contributed by pyrofungus on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:07:12 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Walking
Talking
I started to trip
The world started spinning
The colors were bright
My world was gone
I was running from “them”
I fell on the asphalt
My brain fell out
I was watching it giggle
I poked it and laughed
My brain walked away
I sat and watched
When It disappeared I talked to the Man
The man that didn’t have and arm
Maggots covered his body
Eating him away
Talking and Talking
They finished him off
But left his mouth to talk
It never quit talking
I stuffed it in my pocket
And walked to the moon
There I met my twin
We walked and talked
Until she fell
She fell through the floor
I watched her burn
No one else in sight
Only me and the mouth
My brain was gone,
So I decided to walk
Walk some more
But I started to go up
I was floating!
No I was flying!
I had grown Wings!
Higher and Higher
I came down to Earth
People were staring
Oops oh-well.

Copyright Â© pyrofungus ... [ 2004-05-21 21:07:12]
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Re: One Trip Ago... (User Rating: 1 )
by Colleen on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:39:51 PM AEST
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Another very interesting poem! I love the idea and I love the twist at the end!

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