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Losing Faith in this so Called Reality

Contributed by Katie2008 on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 08:52:22 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'm losing faith in what you say is right, if I pray to God every night, why do my parents still fight?
Why is there still violence in this hell and wether or not I'll live, I can never tell?
I'm starting to lose faith in this so called reality, what seems real to you is merely a fairy tale to me.
What is that thing that you call love? Haven't you any problems?
It seems this so called reality is perfect, your life must be so fun.
I don't know wether to hang on to mine or just run.
Have you never been hurt? Broken or bruised? Never felt the stinging wrath of people hating you?
Please tell me, what's it like in that so called "Reality?" Why has God given it to you, and yet, forgotten about me? I'm starting to lose faith in this so called reality.

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Re: Losing Faith in this so Called Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:39:38 PM AEST
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Katie,
WOW! I am hit hard by your words here. "Reality" is so different for every person. If this is what you are facing and need an ear, please contact me, I would like to try and help if I could.

A Friend,
The Voice

Re: Losing Faith in this so Called Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 02:34:22 AM AEST
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You know sometimes it just takes God a while to get to some, but keep your faith and never give up. For one day all of your prayers will be answered.

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