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What A Shame
Contributed by
MellaSwtASHonee
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Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 06:49:15 PM in AEST
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Many females try to compete with me call me names and stress me out. They hate on me and say im not pretty but I know I look good without a doubt. I think they get mad because their boyfriends try to holla, obviously their doing something wrong because on me he spends more than just a dolla.
Is it my fault I look better than you, how I catch ya man’s eye? Or is it because I am smarter than you? Hmmm… I wonder why.
So I suggest you stay on ya toes and do a little more thinkin’. Hold his hands and watch his eyes, cause if you don’t they will back over here once again winkin.
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Re: What A Shame
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by Katie2008 on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:00:36 PM AEST
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Well, it all sounds a little arrogant to me but the words flow together nicely. Good job.
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Re: What A Shame
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:51:32 PM AEST
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| i agree with katie on this one. |
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