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Him
Contributed by
Dierna
on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 03:17:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Half asleep I sit watching
Night too frightful with him here
A wolf in a man's body
He waits
Watching, ready to strike
New prey, he sees
Sister to the old
Not the sister he hunted before
A new one
Fresher, more life
His thoughts I can hear
"Soon it will be over
I will have my revenge
The fire burning bright
Will be blown out by the wind"
A line along my leg he trails
I shiver in the darkness
Tears run down my face
As I think about the Purple Rose
How its death is my fault.
Will kill the Aaralyn too?
No. I must fight.
I must fight for the star that burns inside.
I must fight-by holding back.
Copyright ©
Dierna
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2004-05-21 15:17:39]
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Re: Him
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by katyqueen35 on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 04:09:19 PM AEST
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Very emotional poem.
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Re: Him
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 04:28:49 PM AEST
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Very passionate write....
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Re: Him
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by sensible_paper on
Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 04:55:41 AM AEST
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wow very emotional, I do find it a little difficult
to follow. But i can see very well written imagery about
the wolf.
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Re: Him
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by sensible_paper on
Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 04:55:47 AM AEST
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wow very emotional, I do find it a little difficult
to follow. But i can see very well written imagery about
the wolf.
Tiff |
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