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I Want to Be With You Now
Contributed by
tinkkerbelle
on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 02:40:55 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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Why does everything remind me of you?
The sun, the stars, the moon, the sea?
It kills me that I can't be with you.
Why do we need to live so far away?
Sometimes I wonder if this will really work.
I hope it will.
I'm willing to try if you are.
The world is an unkind place.
It never fails to remind me that I am lost and alone.
I refuse to let this get to me though.
I want you.
I need you.
I love you.
I can't forget you.
I never will.
It seems as though the world is trying to pull us apart.
But I won't give in.
MW 2001
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2004-05-21 14:40:55]
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Re: I Want to Be With You Now
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 03:04:38 PM AEST
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| Well written i feel your desperation in wanting to be together. |
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Re: I Want to Be With You Now
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 05:53:37 PM AEST
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distance.. the famous pain in the a**
very good write. thanks for sharing, to some extent I can relate to this :)
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