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shadow
Contributed by
herbleaf23
on
Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 08:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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walking home
alone and spent
wondering where
my shadow went
did he journey off into lands unknown?
or did he find a better way home?
I wonder if he knows
Copyright ©
herbleaf23
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2002-10-09 20:45:00]
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Re: shadow
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 11:40:21 PM AEST
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| a good write i see some great talent here. |
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Re: shadow
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 04:44:38 AM AEST
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| And you say my work wants to make you wretch.... |
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Re: shadow
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 06:57:38 AM AEST
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Hmmmm... not bad.....not bad at all.... I like this..
Jenni |
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Re: shadow
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by herbleaf23 on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 05:50:05 PM AEST
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hey chill ms. anonymous. there were 2 lines in one of your poems that made me gag and vomit up the food i had recently eaten. no biggie. it happenes quite a bit. just about everything else you wrote, i enjoyed very much and did not hesitate to tell you so. are you really so misreable that the good stuff people say about you just goes right on over your head while the bad stuff becomes maginified so much that you actually start to doubt yourself and your own god-given talents and abilities so much so that you must take that hostility that is raging inside you out on the fool on the other side of the monitor that said something that stung a bit too hard? lighten up. or don't. it's your life. why don't you go write a poem about it or something.
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