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I Hate You!!!!
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 06:13:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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You caused me so much pain,
More torment than a splinter embedded in the brain,
For years I’ve tried to escape your clutch,
I fear you more than the grim reaper’s touch.
You are constantly by my side,
I can run forever, but I always fail to hide,
You seem to know all my retreats,
Even in the safety of my dreams, it’s you I meet.
It feels like I have an ugly twin,
Who knows my every thought and what I feel within,
Without me uttering so much as a word,
You swoop around me like a ravenous bird.
You mirror my actions and all that I do,
You laugh at my past and all I’ve been through,
You say I deserved it, because I am bad,
You spit in my face and say that you’re glad.
As I wake up it’s your face I see,
Please stop, release me and let me go free,
You have held me captive for 21 years,
I have survived all the bullying and the leers.
You haunt me all day and through the night,
I beg you to leave but you ignore my plight,
You follow me like a ghostly shadow,
All I ask is will you please just go.
I doubt my prayers will ever be listened to,
There’s not one thing that I can possibly do,
I’ll just have to let my tormenter be,
As I look into the mirror, the person I hate is ME.
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pixie
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Re: I Hate You!!!!
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 06:45:08 AM AEST
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look deep within you will find the part of you that you can love
Shari |
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Re: I Hate You!!!!
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 10:51:19 AM AEST
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| bravisimo. i loved the ending. hate is a force that can sometimes drive people, or keep people down. its all in how you look at it. |
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Re: I Hate You!!!!
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by Heartfilledblood on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 02:35:54 PM AEST
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| I loved this. Really good write pixie :) Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: I Hate You!!!!
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 08:35:59 PM AEST
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| very nicely written, i loved it. i also agree with Ilhar, are we ever truley happy with who we are? |
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Re: I Hate You!!!!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:30:27 PM AEST
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Wow , I felt a lot in this. Loved reading it had to read it a couple times. And the ending was awesome!
~Kris~ |
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