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The fat kid.
Contributed by
heartfilledblood
on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 04:00:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I cant play sports
I cant run far
A hard time moving
Up and down those stairs
I wishfull thought off what could be
That of which I cant see
I look at me and for I see
The fat kid of which non bare too be
The life of what no one wants
For I have lived and seen
And now I sit and look at me
Of which has changed
Changed for I am sick
Sick of living what cannot be
Cannot be for I wont stand
Stand for living what I dont want
Im not the kid that you used too know
As I look down the path I see myself
Myself as nothing I could have thought
Thought of being of what I want
To be the all star I always want
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heartfilledblood
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2004-05-21 04:00:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The fat kid.
(User Rating: 1 ) by HOPE4ME2 on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:36:55 AM AEST (User
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WOW....Thought this was awesome, came from life experience for sure. It's good to read poetry that comes from life experience that all can relate to.
Blessings
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Re: The fat kid.
(User Rating: 1 ) by MLCstar on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:38:54 AM AEST (User
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In middle school I thought I was the fat kid. It was really difficult. I grew out of my chub but the taunts and jeers still haunt me. I would not wish it on anyone. You conveyed that so well. Wonderful work. |
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Re: The fat kid.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:04:19 PM AEST (User
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=( this makes me really sad..
i dunno what else to say
very good poem |
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