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Dashed to ground
Contributed by
kalika_vidya
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Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 02:55:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When I rose like a meteor
Amazed were these people
When I dashed to the ground
Spluttering blood into a pool
Merciless were the same…
(based on Sri Sri)
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kalika_vidya
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2004-05-21 02:55:18]
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Re: Dashed to ground
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 03:43:29 AM AEST
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Succinct, and so true.
Interesting write. |
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Re: Dashed to ground
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by venkat on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 04:15:10 AM AEST
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| so true..:-) venkat |
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Re: Dashed to ground
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:44:35 PM AEST
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so true, kalika, an excellent write:) hugs n' love nessa
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