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Glass and Thunder
Contributed by
Randibee85
on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 12:28:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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~~~~~
Like the fly that flies
or the
Child who cries
Your sound brings tears to my heavy eyes
I would kill your voice alone if I could
It'd bring us justice
To destroy is pleasure
I cannot measure
Shattered glass
Like an explosion of taste
Let this mind race
to find a hiding place
For everything of you I cannot waste, or misplace
No more bullets for my gun
No more shattering frame
I hear your voice no more
No thunder throughout my brain
~~~~~
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Randibee85
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2004-05-21 00:28:57]
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Re: Glass and Thunder
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 12:49:15 AM AEST
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| nice i like what you expressed here |
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Re: Glass and Thunder
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by Randibee85 on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 10:06:42 AM AEST
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| Thank you, it's a bit odd because of the shifts and everything. But I wrote it during class when he was talking... He's so monotone. |
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Re: Glass and Thunder
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 09:29:32 PM AEST
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This is a great write...it's so awesome how you can write such a great piece that deals with someone's voice...but yeah it was a great way to write...I dont know awesome write....thats all....
read and comment my work....if you want!!!
-Dani |
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