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A Change In Me
Contributed by
Whisper
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Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 11:08:35 PM in AEST
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Something different -
I can hardly wait .
What is beyond the Corner now.
Each turn I take,
A Coaster ride ,
but usually I come Bouncing Back.
But somehow it dont be happening'
that way!!
Thoughts are heavy
Not Bad to Worse
But deadly thoughts of ...
I "d rather not say.
Try and move
Get Up each day
and pray that no one is noticing ,
A Change in Me.
Whisper
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Whisper
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2004-05-20 23:08:35]
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Re: A Change In Me
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by fairy-of-ice on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 04:20:18 PM AEST
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| i like the idea ''noone is noticing a change in me'' very thought provoking! good poem! |
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Re: A Change In Me
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by wray on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 11:30:00 PM AEST
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| Ooh I can relate to this one. It's a scary, lonely feeling when you find that every day has become a silent ordeal, but for various reasons you can't share it with anyone else. I say, stop thinking about it. Ignore the heaviness in your heart and just live your life and hopefully it'll go away. |
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Re: A Change In Me
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by PsykoticDoll on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:39:03 AM AEST
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| Very nice, you can understand exactly what you're saying. I liked it :) |
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