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Suppose
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 10:19:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Suppose I was to come along and sweep you off your feet.
suppose that I totally stole your heart.
Now suppose I was to lie to you,
to tell you I love you, pretty hurtful huh?
Now suppose you were to believe me...
Pretty damn gullible.
Now suppose our roles were switched, our places reversed
You would know how I feel wouldn't you?
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Re: Suppose
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 10:45:32 PM AEST
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Makes one think, huh....
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Re: Suppose
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by emystar on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 01:14:36 AM AEST
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I agree with Jenni,
Very thought provoking.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Suppose
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by MDodgen on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:09:43 AM AEST
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| short, sweet, and to the point. i like it. first two lines sweet, then bam! reality hits. very good job. |
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Re: Suppose
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:37:05 AM AEST
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hah I agree, and I can realte totally on that level...I liked this one also...very great ending I liked the switch to realityon your part...I loved it...great write
much love,
Dani
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