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I Am
Contributed by
EvanJ117
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Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 08:28:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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I am a distressed man.
I wonder who i am.
I hear crying.
I see pain and agony.
I am a distressed man.
I pretend i am happy.
I touch emptiness.
I feel nothing inside.
I worry about my soul.
I cry.
I am a distressed man.
I understand tomorrow's another day.
I say, only for some.
I dream death.
I am a distressed man.
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Re: I Am
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 08:33:38 PM AEST
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| This poem has great flowing rythym, and that I appreciate. The single line "I Cry" really exemplifies the message, and the break at that point allows the reader to catch up with what he has written. This was quite an enjoyable read. |
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Re: I Am
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 10:53:28 PM AEST
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Ahh...we all feel like this at times ... good write..
Welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net...
Jenni |
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Re: I Am
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by Saitou-sama on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:15:13 PM AEST
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| Good write. I really enjoyed it. |
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