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look harder

Contributed by Luinil on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 05:27:35 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Hey look at me
look what i can be
you see you
i am you

Hey watch me smile
hear me sing
let me listen
for a while

Here, take my hand
take my heart
take my core
just take my life instead

Every scar wears a name
find yourself, find your claim
don't look too close
you'll find the truth

Go ahead cut me down
watch me bleed
rip my life apart
spear my heart with one breath

Follow your leader
don't look away
be happy with yourself
forget about everyone else

Look at my eyes
forget what you see
leave me behind
i'll be your hero

I'll throw you the rope
you climb up
push me over the edge
i'll fly away

I'll follow you away
i'll watch myself give up
i'll be you to make you better
i'll be me when you can't see

You be happy... I'll be free

Copyright © Luinil ... [ 2004-05-20 17:27:35]
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Re: look harder (User Rating: 1 )
by Wolfareen on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 03:13:26 PM AEST
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Ok, so i can't believe this has no reviews because its sooo good. Loved it. Natli xx

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