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A Sweet Nothing
Contributed by
Another_Dimension
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Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 04:29:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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This is just a little something
That i'll whisper in your ear
That i'll sing a whole lot louder
for all the world to hear
Because you are so precious
I'm giving you this rhyme
Great owner of my heart
I'm so proud that you are mine
You've saved me from the darkness
You've cured all of my ills
No longer do i hurt
You have replaced the pills
Your presents makes me glow
I wish you'd never leave
My love you have my trust
It's your word i believe
And before you go to sleep
Will you wish upon a star
For things to stay this way
To be forever how we are.
{My love i love you so so much, i'm sorry for the long hard struggle, but it's over now i promise. No more suffering =) I am yours}
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Another_Dimension
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2004-05-20 16:29:21]
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Re: A Sweet Nothing
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 05:04:58 PM AEST
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Lovely write.. I'd like to think you meant "presence" in the 4th stanza....lol
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Re: A Sweet Nothing
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by Overstated on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 05:06:45 PM AEST
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| beautiful and sweet youve conveyed feelings very well here |
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Re: A Sweet Nothing
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 10:53:18 AM AEST
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this is ~:*beautiful*:~ hugs n' love nessa
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