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Poignant Life
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 02:41:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Does it hurt as much as people say to die
I dont think that it hurts that much
Because it hurts so much to stay alive
I sit alone, the moon luminates my arm,
Such empty skin like a new paint by numbers,
Its time to Fill in the gaps and manufacture art
But then when I experience the pain,
I cogitate if I should terminate my life,
The steel hovers over my wrists,
And above in the heavens it starts to rain
Whats the use of having confidence,
When all it does is mess with your head,
I dont need it just give me Sustenance,
End this misfortunate, painful fable
And watch me bleed alone on my bed
So end this overture and cut straight to dying,
Dont blame me for ending this poignant life,
And I wont care if your eyes start crying,
Because for once in this endless narritive,
I get to choose my own vocation in a knife,
And by my hand, my death I could never forgive
I forgive and then I end it
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-05-20 14:41:06]
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Re: Poignant Life
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by cheech on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 02:47:24 PM AEST
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~`~wow~`~this was a well written peom,i'm glad that u said that these r just how ur feelen,i do hope that u find a way not to feel like this,u seem so smart and intellegent,keep writting what ur big heart desires,cuz u seriously have the potential
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Re: Poignant Life
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 02:51:55 PM AEST
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| this was a great poem....i hope you start to feel better soon....i can really feel your pain in this work..keep writting...your a very smart person. hope to see more of your writing.. |
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Re: Poignant Life
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by antares on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 03:00:53 PM AEST
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| this is a darkly beautiful poem that i enjoyed but felt for at the same time. i really hope u are able to overcome the horrible obstacles that make you feel this way. |
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Re: Poignant Life
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by Another_Dimension on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 03:19:30 PM AEST
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| thank you for commenting on my poem, i'll return the favour. This is ever so deep, every line seemed to be engulfed in agony. I can really empathize with you through this poem. |
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Re: Poignant Life
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 02:29:29 AM AEST
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| Thanks for sharing your pain, Alec. This is a very powerful and poignant piece, as the title suggested. Hope you feel better after having writing it. |
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Re: Poignant Life
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 01:09:01 PM AEST
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this poem is just such a beautiful out pour of your emotions.i could relate to every line as i feel like this so often. if you need someone to talk to i will always listen.
love and hugs
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Re: Poignant Life
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 03:26:51 AM AEST
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well written and heartfelt, i do worry about you, alec, i wish you would read my felo-de-se intersection big hugs n' lotsa love nessa
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Re: Poignant Life
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by waos on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:04:25 PM AEST
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nice write
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