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knife in hands
Contributed by
SAT
on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 02:38:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It's not your fault
no one blames you
i loved you lots
through and through
times were hard
love was rough
but my heart
must be tough
I made it trough
but my time is near
and soon someone will
find me here
with knife in hand
now blood flows free
and my open eyes
no longer see
Copyright ©
SAT
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2004-05-20 14:38:15]
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Re: knife in hands
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by alecfernadez on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 02:42:12 PM AEST
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| I like this, its very vauge but to the point. If there is such a thing, but you seem to have created that, good write (4/5) |
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Re: knife in hands
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 03:29:08 PM AEST
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| Well done , to the point. |
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Re: knife in hands
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by Katie2008 on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 04:08:38 PM AEST
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| Wow, this was really deep. I liked it a lot. Great work! |
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Re: knife in hands
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by SAT on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 02:21:55 PM AEST
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| thanks for all the comments guys!!!!! |
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